We are learning to expand our sentences by adding detail.
Oscar cried.
When At 8.50am, yesterday , A few days ago
Where in the corner , at school , in a hotel room
Why She was being bullied by
In the morning at school Oscar cried because he was being bullied.
They had an argument.
When: In the afternoon
Where: at the playground
Why: she was being bossy
In the afternoon, they had an argument in the playground because she was being bossy.
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